Deep in our mother's womb
It's safe an nice an warm
Then you burst out with a boom
She will keep u away from harm
Live life so when u go to the grave
U can say u used up the time
God gave us, not only being a slave
But leaving a piece of u, even in rhyme! !
i am grateful for the inspiration your words resound but twill be better if you don't use sms language in poetry it will rebound and reduce the explosive sound
Lol ok. Advice taken. When I wrote that I was still reading yours hope all is well
yes but it takes ages to locate replies u may message please ty tc gb ur good poetry
A beautiful creation nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Atasha. Remain enriched.
mothers love, life in the womb, life and death. all described in this poem in small verses. liked it very much my dear poetess. tony
Cool poem! Besides some rhymes, I plan to leave my middle fingers on display in the Museum Of Modern Obscene Art (MOMOA) , one hanging from the Ladies bathroom ceiling and one from the ' Gents '. To MyPoemList it goes. Bri :) You left a comment at my 'advantages' poem. Thanks. I have other LONG, hopefully engaging, poems you are welcome to read. No bio for you? Boohoo. Who... ...ARE you? Are you new... to PH?
I am new yes... A young aspiring poet. Haven't heard of me yet? ... That's ok, my work will speak for me. I will shine bright for the whole world to see! Nice to meet you Bri, the pleasure is mine, I will be the eeriest poet you will ever find! God bless you, looking forward to reading your poetry. Atasha
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
U can say u used up the time God gave us, not only being a slave But leaving a piece of u, even in rhyme! ! this is inspiring and i love your determination to spend a life that is great and useful. God bless you . tony