Womb To Tomb Poem by Atasha Williams

Womb To Tomb

Rating: 5.0


Deep in our mother's womb
It's safe an nice an warm
Then you burst out with a boom
She will keep u away from harm


Live life so when u go to the grave
U can say u used up the time
God gave us, not only being a slave
But leaving a piece of u, even in rhyme! !

Tuesday, February 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life and death,mothers love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 17 February 2016

U can say u used up the time God gave us, not only being a slave But leaving a piece of u, even in rhyme! ! this is inspiring and i love your determination to spend a life that is great and useful. God bless you . tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2016

i am grateful for the inspiration your words resound but twill be better if you don't use sms language in poetry it will rebound and reduce the explosive sound

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Atasha Williams 17 February 2016

Lol ok. Advice taken. When I wrote that I was still reading yours hope all is well

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2016

yes but it takes ages to locate replies u may message please ty tc gb ur good poetry

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Chinedu Dike 28 January 2020

A beautiful creation nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Atasha. Remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2017

mothers love, life in the womb, life and death. all described in this poem in small verses. liked it very much my dear poetess. tony

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Bri Edwards 24 May 2016

Cool poem! Besides some rhymes, I plan to leave my middle fingers on display in the Museum Of Modern Obscene Art (MOMOA) , one hanging from the Ladies bathroom ceiling and one from the ' Gents '. To MyPoemList it goes. Bri :) You left a comment at my 'advantages' poem. Thanks. I have other LONG, hopefully engaging, poems you are welcome to read. No bio for you? Boohoo. Who... ...ARE you? Are you new... to PH?

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Atasha Williams 31 May 2016

I am new yes... A young aspiring poet. Haven't heard of me yet? ... That's ok, my work will speak for me. I will shine bright for the whole world to see! Nice to meet you Bri, the pleasure is mine, I will be the eeriest poet you will ever find! God bless you, looking forward to reading your poetry. Atasha

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Juan Olivarez 01 March 2016

Good words to live by.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 February 2016

From womb to tomb; after the bomb! Thanks for sharing.

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