Words Of A Broken Heart Poem by Justice For All
Words Of A Broken Heart
The guy:
No more lovers no more lies and covers
I will not accept any letter
My heart used to suffer
I see love is just a toy
Play with it then throw it away
And surely you will say
I can feel my heart when i pray
All the doors to my heart had been locked
All the roads to happiness had been blocked
Everything is just a lie
No one can look me in the eye
No one can tell me why
I am saying to my soul good bye
So please god let me die
I see darkness in my day
I feel sadness in every way
The girl:
Don't let your sadness talk
To the darkness don't let it walk
Perhaps some one will care
With your heart will be fair
don't sit and wait
Don't say i feel great
Because you will be late
For the train of your fate.
Well worded and nicely rhymed. Keep writing but don't say good bye to your soul. With the passage of your age you will explore love from different perspectives and with different meanings and will know more about love and life. Best Wishes Naseer
the flow is good and the flow can be better if it is free from clutter, .........
toooooo sad...but waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a heart is not a toy for play' an advice everyone must know....you're really talented..
a sad poem for a despairate moments..well done
i love this one too! ur a machine! lol u didnt capitalize God though. that kinda bugs me. sorry hugs^-^
Very good work with well-placed rhymes and a message that's real in anywhere.10. allan macli
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 5:10:16 AM # 1.0.0
A lovely piece. It's part of becoming mature in a relationship though it hurts but it teaches us a lot.thanks best regards, jdh