Every thought of mine
Should I record it!
Every thought of yours
Should I read it!
There is something deeper
Than words that connects
A reader and a writer.
Some time I would rather
Let it all rest.
Let my existence become
A thought invisible
Yet connecting!
Like an uncut diamond
Encased in deep dark caves
Holding potentiality
Of dazzling beauty!
Waiting for diamond cutter
To fashion it all!
It is a beautiful poem on deep thoughts having nice depiction. The last stanza is most meaningful and well related. Thanks for sharing, dear madam.
Thank you so much Kumarmani. It is a pleasure to read your comment and read your poems as well.
Some time I would rather Let it all rest. Let my existence become A thought invisible Yet connecting! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Yes, I can see a writer turning inward at times, basically I think to restore the settings on his center. We cannot and should not spend all our time communicating, draining our wells, emptying our power reserves. Like an uncut diamond Encased in deep dark caves Holding potentiality Of dazzling beauty! Waiting for diamond cutter To fashion it all! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Oh this is dazzling writing! This is what a writer needs to be- -periodically. But then he needs to let that light in him shine or it goes to waste in the darkness. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A great write on a worthy topic using awesome images and targeted words. 10++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you Susan for your thoughtful and inspiring comment. Keeping that light alive and burning is what inward going does.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes it is. sometimes, someone have this diamond. sometimes it is wasted. sometimes we reach ourselves. beautiful poem of thoughts
Thank you so much for your comment. Yes reaching and finding your own depths is hardest.