Savita Tyagi


Write Less! Connect Deep! Random Thought 39 - Poem by Savita Tyagi

Every thought of mine
Should I record it!
Every thought of yours
Should I read it!

There is something deeper
Than words that connects
A reader and a writer.

Some time I would rather
Let it all rest.
Let my existence become
A thought invisible
Yet connecting!

Like an uncut diamond
Encased in deep dark caves
Holding potentiality
Of dazzling beauty!
Waiting for diamond cutter
To fashion it all!

Topic(s) of this poem: existence, thoughts

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Write Less! Connect Deep! Random Thought 39 by Savita Tyagi

  • Muhammad Ali (7/8/2017 4:10:00 PM)

    yes it is. sometimes, someone have this diamond. sometimes it is wasted. sometimes we reach ourselves. beautiful poem of thoughts (Report)Reply

    Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi(7/8/2017 5:45:00 PM)

    Thank you so much for your comment. Yes reaching and finding your own depths is hardest.

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/29/2017 4:41:00 PM)

    It is a beautiful poem on deep thoughts having nice depiction. The last stanza is most meaningful and well related. Thanks for sharing, dear madam. (Report)Reply

    Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi(6/30/2017 10:17:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Kumarmani. It is a pleasure to read your comment and read your poems as well.

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (6/27/2017 1:36:00 PM)

    Some time I would rather
    Let it all rest.
    Let my existence become
    A thought invisible
    Yet connecting! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Yes, I can see a writer turning inward at times, basically I think to restore the settings on his center. We cannot and should not spend all our time communicating, draining our wells, emptying our power reserves.

    Like an uncut diamond
    Encased in deep dark caves
    Holding potentiality
    Of dazzling beauty!
    Waiting for diamond cutter
    To fashion it all! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Oh this is dazzling writing! This is what a writer needs to be- -periodically. But then he needs to let that light in him shine or it goes to waste in the darkness.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -A great write on a worthy topic using awesome images and targeted words. 10++++++++++++++++++++
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    Savita TyagiSavita Tyagi(6/27/2017 4:25:00 PM)

    Thank you Susan for your thoughtful and inspiring comment. Keeping that light alive and burning is what inward going does.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 24, 2017

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 25, 2017


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