Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 19,999 Points (18 October 1964)

Y.... Man Became Men (Written Together With Unwritten Soul) - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Man became men

Once Man was whole
And then just as
Hand became fingers
Man became men

Man became Farmer
Man became Doctor
Man became Scholar
Man became Ruler

Each became different
But somehow meant to be whole
With heart we may rent
Of life for valuable soul

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Green the land over the field
Green the heart over the greed
Please farmer, use some of the grains to feed
Those who go hungry, those in biggest need
Harvest your love not just crop, be Man farming
If you are a Man among the men


Lend your love and care dear man
Share your honest care as you can
Please doctor, don't just do quick consultations
Don't just get rich by prescribing medications
Be heart warming to men, be Man healing
For you are a Man to care for the men


Speak dear man among the men
Man for the soul, speaks with mind
Please scholar, become Man thinking
Assimilate ideas, yours and others
True mind, merging two worlds with no bother
True ego, humble as Man among others


Rise a man among the men
After votes crowing to rule a land
Please politician be an honest man with power
Stand for the place you crowned as trusted by others
Be a true leader-Man, a back bone for hoping men

...................................... ..............

Man among the men
Fight to understand
Live love and meaning to be a man
We are the Man and we are the men
Whoever we stand as, we are a man among them
If we really understand
Be a Man not just one of the men

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Note: Inspired by an essay of RW Emerson, the American scholar.
The poem was pillared by Hans VR and walled by Unwritten Soul

'The original poetry was truly inspiring, a constant motion thinking by Hans.
The collaboration was done in togetherness: we wanted to write about
be a man that truly understands, not just a man. We all have a role
incomparable and different angles to view, bring soul and mind to life
then we might see the meaning to be a Man among the men.
Thanks Hans for the chance to write with you_Unwritten Soul'

'Man is used as in Manhood, meaning human.
The whole poem could have read Woman and women
Or Human and humans
I hope everyone, Men and Women alike can enjoy the poem.
I wrote a draft and Soul made it into a jewel
Thanks Soul for writing this poem in togetherness. _Hans'

Comments about Y.... Man Became Men (Written Together With Unwritten Soul) by Aufie Zophy

  • Jinal Oswal (7/30/2012 10:39:00 AM)

    Its a true call for humanity.. Everything everything that we see, we think and we can ever imagine is covered.. Lovely lovely poem... Great picture of togetherness, I wish people learn from this understand what it means.. Thank you both of you for this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Diane Hine (6/1/2012 4:49:00 AM)

    Inspiring collaborative work! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (6/1/2012 3:51:00 AM)

    Amazing.Thus you two show togetherness.Novelty of thought. (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2012 2:33:00 PM)

    a call for humanity to be human.... we've raced through life looking for eternal glory,
    forgetting the eternal moment of each moment aware... and as both of you say...
    forgetting the call to be a man(or woman) ... an amazing write... thank both of you!
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  • Unwritten Soul (5/27/2012 7:25:00 AM)

    I chuckled a little for you as you keep....... in each stanza hahaha, Hans, Thanks for inviting me to write a passionate poem with me, and this is not a poem for each of us. Clear visionary and honest opinion is what i treasure when working with you Hans, I cant wait for a time to write one more poem for my page soon. keep inspiring us, you know you are a man among the men and for this you need to stand, dont be man just to join men...Millions thanks for your trust on me to write this with you...Enjoy all for what Hans wanted to tell_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 27, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 27, 2012

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