Y.... No Time Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.... No Time

Rating: 4.9


Some cutters of wood
cannot find the time
to sharpen their axe
to sharpen their saw

Some drivers of cars
cannot find the time
to service their cars
to fill up the fuel

Some human souls
cannot find the time
to read poetry
to pray or do good

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 20 April 2012

Excellent and so true.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 22 April 2012

well and beautifully compared

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Daniel Warner 25 April 2012

Nice Poem pretty cunning

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 02 April 2012

'Do good' i like these two words at the end of your poem my friend, pls check out my latest poems...ACROSS THESE OCEANS...and YOU ARE....

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Spiritual Seeker 04 April 2012

Yes Yes...we always find excuses for not doing something good! Thnx for the reminder...

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Walterrean Salley 12 May 2012

Life is all about prioritizing - putting first things first. But we so often miss the mark, putting trivial things first, and the most important things are next to last on the list. Great thought here.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 30 April 2012

'...Some human souls/cannot find the time/ to read poetry...' You've cracked the nut to enjoy the.kernel...by the emotive readers...unfortunately Poetics are becoming...an ideal time-pass to..I'd say material world...you've reached the gamut ...but poets like you will not refrain to write for refineds...tenner...Regards ~ niv PS Please comment on ' Narco Neroism Bonfire Ride' n

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Valerie Dohren 26 April 2012

Brilliant - time is precious, we should use it well.

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Ramesh Rai 26 April 2012

xlent, well versed. it is true thre are least readers of poems, but they read with core of heart. keep it up.

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Vipins Puthooran 25 April 2012

Excellent and beautiful! ! !

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