You Poem by Arielle Friese

You



All i want is you dont u understand.
You left me for my friend..
Why cant i have u for christmas
It will be all i ask for nothing more.

Please Santa bring me my love
I want him so much i miss him.
You dont have to bring me anything else all
I want is him under my xmas tree this year.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chidori Storm 24 December 2011

This one shows how much you miss the one person you care about the most. It is a really good poem. I have felt the same thing. Don't stop writing. I look forward to seeing the next poem from you.

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Unwritten Soul 24 December 2011

MAybe you can put a big sock under the chimney...dont forget the big cookies and milk for santa..it is tough work :) hahaha JOking :) ..OK i m serious now, it sounds like wishing for something you really want...but it's hard to get it right, but sure it's not over yet..day will come where you will find something bigger under your christmas tree...no charge of cookies and milk maybe hahaha..keep happy Arielle_Unwritten Soul

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Lavion Bell 30 January 2012

i fell you word for this one i liked it

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Dead Leaf 26 January 2012

hope...yes that is what make us to live.....good poem

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Deep Mukherjee 12 January 2012

A very good one but don't worry life will show various windows of light on the way; you just have to seek out :)

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Binish Cd 04 January 2012

a good write missing the lover........great expression....

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Hope Anderson 24 December 2011

thumbs up i really like it: +) cant wait to read more: +) keep it up

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