You Poem by Sarah Ibrahim

You

Rating: 5.0


My Dreams, Hopes, Future and Life
All got burned thanks to your lies

Trying to make me look like a fool
when i Rise you push me hard to the floor

you want to Cover me with these old sheets
saying'want to protect you from the world's freaks'?

what if I said your the only freak there is
wonder how will it sound and feels?

and If I said I wont take it anymore
I wont allow you to break me to the floor

Im Sick of the way you Treat me
Sick of waiting for someone to free me

My Heart is Filled with anger
sometimes I feel it's a Heart of a Stranger

When I say I'v found the freedom door
I Realize im in a new Darkness Core

So, hear me when I Shout
Cause my voice will reach the Clouds

I won't hold it for much longer
I'll show you who is stronger

and When you try to Handcuff me
I'll show you a face you never saw of me

and You will never hurt me anymore
Cause I'll always fight back for sure

Sarah Ibrahim ©

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mz.Honesty Only 21 January 2008

Sarah.... that was a great poem. I can relate to it so much.You should check out my poems and tell me what you think if you have time. But you just got a new fan. I give you a 10.

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Randy Hogan 15 May 2009

Your passion is so intense. You Love as hard as you fight... So my question is to anyone whats to hold you down.. Why fight when you can Love? She my rough you up Just a little..Just the same.. but that a small price to pay....for Romance 'Make Love not War' 10ssssssssssssss

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 September 2008

hey ya goat to be serious my dear sarah.it's sounds soooooooooo mean! ! !

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Sounds familiar! Accept a humble 10

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Amin Umar Ilelah 30 January 2008

a great babe with a strong heart, keep the fire burning so that you won't see darkness again

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Shannon Wright 24 January 2008

Sarah- A ten from me as well. EXCELLENT. -shannon

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