You Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

You

Rating: 5.0


Every word from my mind to my pen
Each verse I create today since then
Every poem from my heart to my brain
To you I offer time and time again
The song I sing every time I am blue
The tune I hum when I am missing you
Come see the signs, look at each clue
Find how they all point out to you.
Because you are the soothing voice
That calms my every pain
You are the gentle breeze
You relax and make me sane
You make me laugh you make me smile
You come rescuing in just a while.
It is you who makes me-ME
With you I am completely happy
You are the one without a doubt
The only one I can't live without.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 February 2011

Very enchanting indeed. The whole poem is full of the fragrance of love. Your dedication is really marvellous. Great write. Thank for sharing. Please read my poem 'My ultimate companion' on p.3

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Briana Johnson 25 February 2011

That was nice relaxed rhyme to display an engaged and lovely poem.

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Terence George Craddock 08 March 2011

Beautiful verse written from the lover to the beloved, the truth and pain of an absent lover expressed in 'I Miss You'.

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

You are the gentle breeze You relax and make me sane You make me laugh you make me smile You come rescuing in just a while You have done an embellishment very agile Poetry embraces your life like Egypt did with river Nile Superb write......

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Cristina Teodor 05 October 2011

Beautiful verses to express how unique can be for you someone you love.These rhymes are so soothing to my ears, so full with passion.Very nice poem..Cristina Teodor

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Khairul Ahsan 04 August 2013

I applaud all the poets who have penned here the beautiful feelings of their beautiful minds, having read this beautiful piece of poetry. I find a share of my own feelings in each of the comments here. Long live love, the lovers and the loved ones!

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Khairul Ahsan 04 August 2013

It is you who makes me-ME With you I am completely happy You are the one without a doubt The only one I can't live without. Thanks for sharing these nice feelings, for whoever they are meant. All lovers would be happy to hear such nice loving words. Over all, the poem is an excellent one, a reader's delight.

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Stephen Holland 10 February 2012

This poem has moved me so much,10 out of 10 (I would give more if possible) ! ! !

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Kevin Patrick 26 October 2011

One of my favourites by you (no pun intended) it really showcases a good balance of ryhthm, and its a very infectious and warm message. Everyone could use your sentiments, very cheerful.

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 October 2011

YOU AND YOU....means everything to me...(Suerte naman niya) sweet piece with wonderful rhymes.. it's like a music..refreshing..expressive...

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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