You Are Going Out Of Track Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You Are Going Out Of Track

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We advise because you are going out,
You are going out of track from duty,
Responsibility you should understand,
Importance of time you should feel.

This is God's garden we live happily,
He has gifted resources us to utilise,
We should also preserve them in care,
Sustainable development is our aim.

You are showing violence and war,
You have acquired greed and vices,
If you are breaking rules and peace,
You are going out of track we can say.

God does not like bad activities at all,
Violence and war bring sorrow and pain,
All need love and peace in this world,
Greatest duty of humanity you should do.

Pleasing God through service is nice,
Break your selfishness and hold love,
You find peace through selfless service,
Have control, you do not go out of track.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,29 October 2017. All rights reserved.

Sunday, October 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational,life,perception,works
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 06 July 2019

Great write and a wise counsel to the erring man. I wonder if God sometimes feels, He made a mistake creating man.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Going out of track is dangerous. We should walk in right path. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Joshua Aaron Guillory 05 November 2017

Great message! Humanity is shown through peace and love. Thanks for sharing :)

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 October 2017

Such a powerful message is delivered in this poem! So sad, and self-destructive is the reality of our times..

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Rini Shibu 29 October 2017

violence and war bring sorrow and pain, do not go out of track, have peace and love.. An inspirational write

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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