You Are In The Rains-3 Poem by Sanjukta Sahoo

You Are In The Rains-3

Rating: 5.0


Rains play hide and seek

The clouds set the sun apart

You come as a rainbow

Right there on me Eastern sky

Where we dreamt of a Gold mine

In those years of rain soaked games.


Our love is ever a promise

Like the clouds

Climbing the distant hills

To bring more of raining nights

Knocking gently taps outside

The window panes

Of our cosy warm bed room.

Friday, August 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,love and friendship,rain,rain drops,rainbow,rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Knocking gently taps outside The window panes Of our cosy warm bed room. Beauty of word selection amazed me. Thanks Sanjukta for your benevolent attempt to talk to us about you through these poems. Thank you for being a honest woman in disclosing the heart inside. 10+++ for this poem.

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Bichitra Anand 25 August 2017

Clouds, hills and rain -all intensify passion in human at any point of life.My dear Poetess, agriculturists also feel this, amazing ! I admire your feelings.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

Rains play hide and seek The clouds set the sun apart You come as a rainbow... romantic beginning. No third person in two closed hearts. Many thanks dear Sanjukta, keep the ball rolling.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Knocking gently taps outside The window panes Of our cosy warm bed room. Beautiful imagery dear. Keep writing. 10+++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 26 August 2017

You come as a rainbow Right there on me Eastern sky Where we dreamt of a Gold mine In those years of rain soaked games. It is a nice rainbow poem dear..keep writing.. 10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 27 September 2017

Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills Nicely penned poem. Thank for the sharing. 10

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 September 2017

Write comment. Fine imagination, Sanjuk. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2017

Beautiful poem on love that contains the possibility of Rains, the promising clouds crossing or climbing the distant hills. Thanks Sanjukta for the poem. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 September 2017

Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Knocking gently taps outside The window panes Of our cosy warm bed room. A marvelous poem. 10++

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D Priyanka Singh 07 September 2017

Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Highly romantic. 10+++++

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