Rains play hide and seek
The clouds set the sun apart
You come as a rainbow
Right there on me Eastern sky
Where we dreamt of a Gold mine
In those years of rain soaked games.
Our love is ever a promise
Like the clouds
Climbing the distant hills
To bring more of raining nights
Knocking gently taps outside
The window panes
Of our cosy warm bed room.
Clouds, hills and rain -all intensify passion in human at any point of life.My dear Poetess, agriculturists also feel this, amazing ! I admire your feelings.10
Rains play hide and seek The clouds set the sun apart You come as a rainbow... romantic beginning. No third person in two closed hearts. Many thanks dear Sanjukta, keep the ball rolling.
Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Knocking gently taps outside The window panes Of our cosy warm bed room. Beautiful imagery dear. Keep writing. 10+++
You come as a rainbow Right there on me Eastern sky Where we dreamt of a Gold mine In those years of rain soaked games. It is a nice rainbow poem dear..keep writing.. 10+++
Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills Nicely penned poem. Thank for the sharing. 10
Write comment. Fine imagination, Sanjuk. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Beautiful poem on love that contains the possibility of Rains, the promising clouds crossing or climbing the distant hills. Thanks Sanjukta for the poem. 10++
Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Knocking gently taps outside The window panes Of our cosy warm bed room. A marvelous poem. 10++
Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Highly romantic. 10+++++
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Our love is ever a promise Like the clouds Climbing the distant hills To bring more of raining nights Knocking gently taps outside The window panes Of our cosy warm bed room. Beauty of word selection amazed me. Thanks Sanjukta for your benevolent attempt to talk to us about you through these poems. Thank you for being a honest woman in disclosing the heart inside. 10+++ for this poem.