You Are Like An Alien Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

You Are Like An Alien



Your behavior has hurt me so much
My mind has exploded like a supernova
The scattered emotions are turning into poetry
Revolving around you my star like planets and comets

Your beauty has impressed me so much
My love has turned into something like a nebula
That is giving birth to lust's light like newborn stars

Your make-believe has made me believe
That true love really exists in this dreary world
And gives me light in the darkness like distant quasars

Every now and then the fights with you
Has turned you into something like a black hole
Now you are invisible to me but attract me ever more

You are like a sweet dream in the dreadful night
But it will not come true in this life coz you are like an alien
In the 2.5 million light-years away from earth Andromeda galaxy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

An alien beauty became a joy for ever.Not always though but sometimes yes and taking the positive into assumption its a nicely penned one.Very exquisite write Sir

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Jaqualen Roberts 28 September 2012

intresting peice of litiriture

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So Close 28 September 2012

nice work asif.... You are like a sweet dream in the dreadful night But it will not come true in this life coz you are like an alien In the 2.5 million light-years away from earth Andromeda galaxy i really love these lines... »so close«

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Gwenevere Cornwell 28 September 2012

This is truly brilliant!

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Stevie Taite 28 September 2012

This is out of this world Asif! Love it! We are doing about the life cycle of stars in class at the mo! A good analogy about out of reach love! Thanks for the heads up!

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 September 2012

Spontaneous parameters as words are observed to swing giving readers the zing thing of poetry

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Hazel Durham 29 September 2012

Great imagery so visual full of deep emotions, great write!

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Thomas Hsi 29 September 2012

Wonderfully creative! Liked how you used the elements of astronomy in your declaration of love. Thanks.

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Akanksha Bhatt 29 September 2012

awsome! ! ! cuz it was really something different! ! ! ! good job! ! !

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Darkangel Flyfree 28 September 2012

Very nice, your style is very unique! Awesome poem!

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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