You Are Like An Alien Comments

Spontaneous parameters as words are observed to swing giving readers the zing thing of poetry

Great imagery so visual full of deep emotions, great write!

Wonderfully creative! Liked how you used the elements of astronomy in your declaration of love. Thanks.

awsome! ! ! cuz it was really something different! ! ! ! good job! ! !

Very nice, your style is very unique! Awesome poem!

i ve read this for the first time, and infact my first poem on your profile, lol you the best...i like the way the story line goes, for me nothing is missing.big up! ! !

This is the first poem I ever read of you and I can already tell that you are quite a poet hey.

Wow! I like it cause it is indeed a very good one!

SEEMS ITS WRITTEN BY A STUDENT OF ASTRONOMY... GOOD INTERPRETATION

This is out of this world Asif! Love it! We are doing about the life cycle of stars in class at the mo! A good analogy about out of reach love! Thanks for the heads up!

This is truly brilliant!

nice work asif.... You are like a sweet dream in the dreadful night But it will not come true in this life coz you are like an alien In the 2.5 million light-years away from earth Andromeda galaxy i really love these lines... »so close«

intresting peice of litiriture

An alien beauty became a joy for ever.Not always though but sometimes yes and taking the positive into assumption its a nicely penned one.Very exquisite write Sir