You'D Like To Catch Every Moment Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

You'D Like To Catch Every Moment



Am I satisfied?
Of course I am.
However...
I do think,
You carry this 'togetherness' philosophy of yours,
To the extreme at times.

I would like 'some' privacy as I use the bathroom.
Unless you feel I might fall into a creative spell,
You'd like to witness?
And you'd like to catch every moment,
Of my movement!

'No! No.
I just miss you so much.
I hope you don't feel I am being too possessive? '

Not yet!
But I am tempted to close the door,
From now on.
Maybe even lock it!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 26 December 2008

Oh, I laughed and laughed at this exhilarating write - how do we love witrhout wanting to 'catch every moment of my movement'. You're a lucky man, Lawrence, to have such love and this write sings glories to it (I don't like ending a sentence with the word 'it'.; but here I am with it)

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