You Determine Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You Determine

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Determination is too strong
To perceive this universe
You determine laws in rows
We hope to arrange memories.

You are super and super ever
Who can imagine your form?
Unless you do not tell this
Your secret you know father.

But you determine us in joy
Giving nice wisdom each time
Birth and death swim in body
We are eternal souls we float.

You determine laws and we act
Our action takes us so far
Rewards we get accordingly
You determine faith for long.

Tuesday, March 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kishore Kumar Das 29 March 2016

our rewards are determined by Him.......the hidden meaning enclosed beautifully in this poem...

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Bill Khaki 20 October 2020

Strong universe and its values can be felt very well with brilliance action in silence.

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M Asim Nehal 26 May 2016

Yet another inspiring poem, Outstanding 10+++++

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 13 April 2016

Birth and death swim in body, well captured thought of the determined almighty

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2016

Determination! Nice piece of work.

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Very well said about determination.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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