You Left Me! (Parody On 'Drinking Makes Me Miss You…' By Kim Wilkins) Poem by Konstantin Ananin

the twist at the end is fantastic, really unpredictable. i liked your repeated exclamations, like a panic. good work

Ha, it's great. It sounds like someone has an alcohol addiction. Your poem twists and turns. Just when you think you have it figured out, bang! You see you don't. you did excellent work.

Vodka with a twist of lemon Beautifully done

i love the twist you made in this poem... thanks for sharing

a heartfelt poem thanks for sharing

I graded it a 7 , but I would give it a nine if the structure were different. You have written a two stanza piece. It is in only one stanza. My preference, however, would be to keep it in one stanza. When you transition into the lines of exclamation. I would simply present each line separately down the page. It is a very unconventional thing to do. However, you have written an unconventional piece excellantly. If you can separate each exclamation line, the reader will appreciate each line. This should give this work much acclaim among readers. It will clarify what you have written, and add to the appreciation of the readers. GW62