You Make Me Feel So Real Poem by Ken e Hall

You Make Me Feel So Real

Rating: 4.4


No throne seats I, but I feel a king,
When you appear I drink the sight of you,
I wrap your loveliness around myself
As your aroma shivers my being.
What fools thru fingers let slip this pearl,
What hand chose me, for such chance?
To receive beauty from a beauteous glance,
Nay, you I will never fail in love and honour.
No Lancelot sword or kingdom spread
Can I lay at your feet,
Only a tiny apartment in a big city street.
No riches to shower or Mercedes on cue,
No diamonds or day dreams
Only hands that will provide for you.
My love stands to shield and protect,
To forge you a future so foreseen
For you only,
That’s fit for a queen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 28 May 2015

Wonderful poem on love. lovely muse so touching sir! May you share your views on my Love Ride too!

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Muhammad Ali 08 April 2009

love meditation i think the song hit on the right target nice one

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Anjali Sinha 28 March 2009

its soooooooo touchhhhhhhhing this love poem of yours- who wants to search for diamonds in the sand when I have it straight here on my hands! ! ! ! ! ! ! wonderful A+++ and 10 anjali

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Fay Slimm 16 December 2008

Ken - - this is one lovely poem....full of well constructed verse and the subject matter is one, with which the reader can tell, really fills your heart.... thank you for sharing this - - you have put your love into my day. Greetings from Cornwall.U.K. and a 10 ++ from Fay.

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Martine Kolber 25 November 2008

Heartfelt poem, what woman would not love to read such a lovely message! Love, Martine

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