Ken e Hall

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You Make Me Feel So Real - Poem by Ken e Hall

No throne seats I, but I feel a king,
When you appear I drink the sight of you,
I wrap your loveliness around myself
As your aroma shivers my being.
What fools thru fingers let slip this pearl,
What hand chose me, for such chance?
To receive beauty from a beauteous glance,
Nay, you I will never fail in love and honour.
No Lancelot sword or kingdom spread
Can I lay at your feet,
Only a tiny apartment in a big city street.
No riches to shower or Mercedes on cue,
No diamonds or day dreams
Only hands that will provide for you.
My love stands to shield and protect,
To forge you a future so foreseen
For you only,
That’s fit for a queen.


Comments about You Make Me Feel So Real by Ken e Hall

  • Queeny Gona (5/28/2015 6:14:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem on love. lovely muse so touching sir!

    May you share your views on my Love Ride too!
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  • (4/8/2009 4:59:00 AM)


    love meditation
    i think the song hit on the right target
    nice one
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  • (3/28/2009 2:28:00 AM)


    its soooooooo touchhhhhhhhing
    this love poem of yours-
    who wants to search for diamonds in the sand
    when I have it straight here on my hands! ! ! ! ! ! !
    wonderful A+++ and 10
    anjali
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  • Fay Slimm (12/16/2008 1:27:00 AM)


    Ken - - this is one lovely poem....full of well constructed verse and the subject matter is one, with which the reader can tell, really fills your heart.... thank you for sharing this - - you have put your love into my day. Greetings from Cornwall.U.K. and a 10 ++ from Fay. (Report) Reply

  • (11/25/2008 4:51:00 AM)


    Heartfelt poem, what woman would not love to read such a lovely message! Love, Martine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 25, 2009


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