jodi right

You Ugly Git

You ugly git, you stupid girl
Why you lookin at me?
What’s with ya starin at me?
An’t you had enough

I have to put up with your sorry ass
You’re just another pathetic lass
Cheap shitty clothes, mucky hair
You got no class, no wonder no-one stares
You’re crazy! He dunt like ya, you fat bitch
Take another look at yourself you're no hitch
Get real; you got no life, you’re one of them losers
Who walks by night-by-night, havin nowt to do
Makin the street look disgustin, all grimy to
Don’t gimme that look, you can’t change
No way, you’re stuck in a rut, you can’t exchange
Why don’t you do your self in, do us all a favour
No, lippy and eye shadow’s not your saviour
Face it; you’ll never be her, she pretty, you’re not

Stop lookin at me!
Stop starin at me!
Can’t you see this mirror's had enough?

Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 18, 2006
Poem Edited: Monday, May 12, 2008

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Comments about You Ugly Git by jodi right

  • Sidi Mahtrow (2/18/2006 4:23:00 PM)

    Now here's a poem that I like.

    Has it all: (the four e's)
    Excite (the title)
    Entertain (gets and holds attention)
    Educates (Catches the reader by surprise)
    Ends (Hey! It's a mirror talking!)


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  • ***** ********* (2/18/2006 3:51:00 PM)

    Well it works, but to what point I have no idea. 7 for dialect. Tai

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