You Will Prosper Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You Will Prosper

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While you will obey the laws right,
You will feel the mercy of God light.
Night of life will go away so far,
You will prosper Oh! Shiny star.

He is gracious, he feels us,
His guidance you obey thus.
Every day you remember and remain pure,
Father will give pleasure to you sure.

This is beautiful bed our lovely earth,
He has created here we do take birth.
Some clouds to down he sends for rain,
Sky is our roof, it removes our pain.

Fruits we get from beautiful tree,
By his grace we move here free.
We have freedom to think an work,
By self power we break deep murk.

Opening our mouth his glory we sing,
At every moment time does ring.
Oh dear souls! Always feel God father,
In his kingdom we ought not bother.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,28 April 2015. All rights reserved.

Thursday, November 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,joy,life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2016

picture of Fay Slimm xA compelling read of living with faith and looking around to see wonders of God's creation on earth - a really enjoyable and uplifting read. 28 Apr 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x............a poem so beautiful....with a most wonderful message, of being faithful ★ Every day you remember and remain pure, Father will give pleasure to you sure. 28 Apr 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xUplifting work of faith. Lovely and inspiring as always. 29 Apr 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of G. Akanji Olaniyi xkind of what is needed! tfs! ! ! 29 Apr 2015 by G. Akanji Olaniyi | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xGood work 29 Apr 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of moeze lalji xa poem on faith is always a blessing ameen 29 Apr 2015 by moeze lalji | Reply picture of Joseph Anderson xA very lovely poem with great reverence.I am finding much great poetic works coming from your fair landAs Nishu said it was uplifting, inspiring and had a smooth, well cadenced rhymning pattern.Well done Sir 29 Apr 2015 by Joseph Anderson | Reply

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Milan Panda 25 October 2020

God's grace gives us prosperity. We realize this truth. We feel god's grace. This poem is nice.

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Aniruddha Pathak 18 October 2019

Yes, in God's kingdom we need worry for nothing, His grace will ensure that we prosper. Lovely prayer

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

God gives us freedom.Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Indira Renganathan 27 November 2016

With a good message a very good prayer-poem....thank you Kumar- 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 November 2016

He is gracious! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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