Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 184,981 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

You The Shining Stars - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

My dear little children
You are the shining stars,
You are all souls like me
Bodies are your cars.

I can't forget you now and then
I can't forget your prank,
You are so lovely so nice
You are very frank.

You are twinkle little stars
You are agog to parents,
You have power to acquire knowledge
You have many talents.

You are lights to remove darkness
Darkness of parents' sadness,
You are lovely you love too
To all you have kindness?

My dear little children
You are like the novas,
I enjoy your swinging tricks
Your wigging for scented guavas.

Dear children go ahead
Go in life progress,
You will be great sure -
By dint of labour and grace.

You are in my heart and soul
You will be czars,
Keep God in your heart
He will save you from scars.

Topic(s) of this poem: advice, children, spiritual


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Poet thinks the children as shining stars. He imagines their playing tricks, talents and future progress. He loves the children and he advises them to do best and to be the persons having great power.
Glossary
Wiggle – cause to move from side to side repeatedly
Nova – star that suddenly becomes much brighter for a short time
Prank – practical joke, Scar – lasting effect of grief, Czar – person having great power.

Comments about You The Shining Stars by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:30:00 PM)

    Feedback received
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    xeloquent and wise ♥
    28 Aug 2015 by Leila Hadi | Reply

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    xWise words and good advice, Sir.
    28 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

    picture of Angel mia LOVE
    xLovely ink tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings my dear friend
    28 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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    xIt's a shame children grow up to be adults.
    28 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply

    picture of Mfena Ortswen
    xBeautiful! Children deserve to be appreciated and you did a fine job of it. Thank you.
    28 Aug 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply

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    xThe love rich teacher in your poet heart shines in this poem...nice
    28 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply

    picture of.. magnolia
    xChildren are the future! lovely words, thank you
    29 Aug 2015 by.. magnolia | Reply

    picture of 'witch! '
    xvery sweet and a nice read.
    30 Aug 2015 by 'witch! ' | Reply

    picture of Gary Lee
    xThis has a unique use of words, and it is so true that God is the way. Love it.
    31 Aug 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply

    picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡
    x............beautifully penned, one of my favorites of yours...thank you for sharing ★
    1 Sep 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

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    xBravo sir! ~namaste!
    12 Oct 2015 by Redbarchettadrive... | Reply
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  • Amitava Sur (9/6/2015 8:22:00 PM)


    An inspirational poem to the children whom you suppose to endear and praise. The children are really the future of society and humanity who will carry forward this earth towards future with all prosperity. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/2/2015 11:35:00 AM)


    You are in my hear and soul. Great piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (9/1/2015 5:58:00 PM)


    They certainly are shining stars that need nurturing and protection to reach full shine (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/30/2015 6:55:00 AM)


    Children are shining stars. They are the future. For a teacher they are seekers of knowledge. Their achievement is admirable and their pranks forgivable. Beautifully depicted in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Ayman Parray (8/29/2015 6:36:00 PM)


    A beautiful, beautiful poem that fills my heart with tremendous love. Thank you my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/29/2015 4:37:00 AM)


    Yes children are the shining stars, liked it.................................10 (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (8/28/2015 8:13:00 PM)


    Elegant, simple poem on children. Thanks for sharing. (10) (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (8/28/2015 6:41:00 AM)


    You seem to be a lover of children! Your advice to them will help them bloom in life. I have always enjoyed your inspirational writes to children! Yes, let them shine like stars and delight everyone with their innate charm and innocence! ! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (8/28/2015 12:12:00 AM)


    this poem shows your love for children and how you inspire them to shine like stars or to be a czar. a poem full with hope. it's a pleasure reading this poem.10 is a lowest number to rate this poem, as it deserves more then 10. thank you sir for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/27/2015 10:32:00 PM)


    Our bodies are indeed momentary cars. Vehicles to acknowledge our consciousness. To use them for positive purposes is the intent. Mind that accompanies is responsible for works of art such as this.
    Blessings to the poet who comprehends!
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, August 28, 2015


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