Tuesday, January 31, 2023

Young At Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Age is that thing
That devours your body with time,
One moment you're agile,
Feeling fine,
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2023

The Title of this poem is the same as the film wherein Doris Day played a leading role, the theme I don't know anymore, only the Title's name, but your poem has a special message, wonderful poem deserves Top Marks, Jayne. Enjoyed it

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me poet yeps poet 01 February 2023

yes age is granted to help u wait before HE CALLS YOU IN GR88888

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 February 2023

Thank you everyone : ) I really appreciate your kind comments x

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2023

It is true. Life is precious. We should use every moments of this life. Serving the poor and keeping healthy and smiling. Nice share.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 January 2023

I enjoyed this poem Jayne TFS

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Bharati Nayak 31 January 2023

It is a very positive poem about life's realities!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2023

A precious poem with a precise message at the end... loved it

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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