Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 54,655 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

Your Eyes - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Your eyes beheld me
Flooded with a deluge of affection
Imprisoning me in depths unmeasured

Your gaze was long and penetrative
It made me flinch and reel
It cut through me like a dagger
I couldn’t escape its fire
I couldn’t break its chains

Your eyes, deep as ocean
Your eyes, seeing as wisdom
Your eyes, full as love
Your eyes, burning as hell
Your eyes, your eyes
I loved and feared.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Your Eyes by Nosheen Irfan

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/25/2016 3:51:00 PM)


    Its passion increases with every read! Well done Nosheen! (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/30/2016 5:24:00 AM)


    Affection! Love and dreams. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (2/12/2016 11:37:00 PM)


    It cut through me like a dagger
    I couldn’t escape its fire
    I couldn’t break its chains

    How much of power, how much of magic....... how much of might, how much wizardry those eyes carried! It could equally ignite in you flames of passion as well as fear! Powerful portrayal..... Nosheen!
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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/26/2016 8:13:00 PM)


    Pregnant with a passion that can only be felt by the heart and seen with eyes! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/12/2016 9:25:00 PM)


    Your eyes, your eyes
    I loved and feared.
    I see fear of the poetess as her own inner fears of ecstasy that the wine of loving eyes can bring for her. An amazing poem.
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/6/2016 5:39:00 AM)


    love, experience, intimacy, passion, desire. all well expressed in your poem. thank you for this wonderful poem. tony (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 16, 2015



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