Your Gaze Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Your Gaze

Rating: 5.0


Transfixed...

by the hypnotic laser
of your gaze,
no longer aware
of time, or space:

I melt...

in the fluidity of my being;
intricate emotions flow
in cascades
of continuity...

I go back into the womb...

I know nothing,
and feel everything;

your gaze turns, —then
time returns,
and hits me hard—
back to reality!

I am solid again—

heavy as a stone:
grounded, rational,
awkwardly rebalancing

the terrestrial gravitation.

Monday, December 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,eyes,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

To my favourite list......

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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

Outstanding poem. Your last stanza took it to a different level.10++++ I am solid again — heavy as a stone: grounded, rational, awkwardly rebalancing the terrestrial gravitation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2018

.... and feel everything! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 04 December 2018

Bravo Mihaela! Splendid poem!

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Valsa George 03 December 2018

Sometimes a gaze can be so powerful that it will grab one into its gravitational pull and one may feel levitating! Beautiful poem! A 10

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