Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Your Rays Comments

Rating: 4.5

You are the diamond
mined from eternal depth of evolution
your rays are so vibrant
that can scratch the stars
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ramesh rai
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 October 2014

Love that keeps depth a lovely powerful poem strong poem..

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Amitava Sur 16 October 2014

The supremacy and the authority is expressed here so firmly and gallantly ! !

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Hazel Durham 16 October 2014

Rays of sunshine and happiness so beautifully expressed with panache!

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Beautiful lines..... if broken into pieces stars will blush upon their existence and pride. Very true said...Loved reading it.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 15 October 2014

well written....especially the lat line, that is th eternal truth....and what 's more.... the source of inspiration...

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 October 2014

Beautifully written poem. Enjoyed the way you have expressed your inspiration. Lovely.

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