Your Smile Poem by mark nwagwu

Your Smile

Rating: 5.0


Your smile begs the stars
to light up my being
with enamel brightness
firmly toothed
moon in obeisance
crawls out in assistance
my soul confirming
breaks out in dance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 16 December 2008

captivating smile with a same like of this poem...a 10/10

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Fine imagery and with depth Dancing 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Indira Babbellapati 16 December 2008

short sweet n smiling, your smile brought smile to my face

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

My smile--and you break dance wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! and then the enamel brightness whose mine or yours? whatever +++++10 regards anjali (read mine Thanatos)

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2008

a short but deep poem...there is more than a smile morethan a dance inside this...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

Break dancing after a love triumph? ? Wow......its kool Mark! !

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