Your smile begs the stars
to light up my being
with enamel brightness
firmly toothed
moon in obeisance
crawls out in assistance
my soul confirming
breaks out in dance
Fine imagery and with depth Dancing 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
short sweet n smiling, your smile brought smile to my face
My smile--and you break dance wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! and then the enamel brightness whose mine or yours? whatever +++++10 regards anjali (read mine Thanatos)
a short but deep poem...there is more than a smile morethan a dance inside this...10
Break dancing after a love triumph? ? Wow......its kool Mark! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
captivating smile with a same like of this poem...a 10/10