Eros Poem by mark nwagwu


Rating: 5.0

Eros in dance divine love descending
Proudly possessive ecstatic transforming
Eternal joy fulfilling relentlessly spreading
Body and soul intimately growing
Flesh soulless fleeting pleasure seeking
Soul shorn of form in cloister secluding
Human person created divine love exhaling
Image of Maker skyward reflecting

Eros transforming in faith responsive
Lovers wondering grandiosely permissive
Inexorably rising to heights constructive
Hills and woods and skies assertive
All creation agog with heavens expansive
Earth and kingdoms a marriage conclusive
Image of God in humans elective
Image of humans in God redemptive

Kesav Easwaran 08 January 2009

good composition on Eros, Mark...beautiful selctive use of words in the construction of the lines...good piece...10

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Lawrence Beck 07 January 2009

What an enjoyable rush of words! This is very nice, Mark. Larry Beck

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Tsira Goge 07 January 2009

Eros - that - А mmur, that Cupid.... the son - one version Zeus and Aphrodites... Good compositions... Without love all loses thought... And the god himself is love....mark, Perfectly write...10... Bst wishes, Tsira

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Marilyn Lott 07 January 2009

Very interesting choice of words, Mark, while taking us on a refreshing journey. Keep writing and sharing. Best Wishes, marilyn

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Ency Bearis 07 January 2009

great write..nice flow...great piece..10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 April 2010

Golden lines from golden emotion…chiseled by golden tool… Thanks Sir… Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sandra Fowler 12 January 2009

Very vivid and expressive. You are a fine wordsmith. Warm regards, Sandra

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Vaibhav Pandey 12 January 2009

greta poem, sir 10 all the way

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Indira Babbellapati 09 January 2009

a very spiritual perspective...

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Indira Babbellapati 09 January 2009

a very spiritual perspective...

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Obetiti Nguru Nigeria
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