Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 14,493 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Your Verses And My Comments! ! ! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Beautiful verses of yours
Were very pleasant to read
With wonderful message.
Love, pain and mystery
Made it a perfect
Each sincere words
poured out from your heart
Made it stupendous.

What more interesting was
You left the readers
To think on its way
So free were your verses
Loved the way..

What most beautiful Was
The rhythmic flow
Made it melancholic.

Concluded with a twist In it
Made the readers
To read it once more.

What should I comment
On this beautiful flow of words...
Let nothing obstruct
The flow of your pen.
The indepth message in it
Made it worth reading.
Your poem speaks
A lot to us
Made it worthwhile
Reading it.

May your poem win the heart of many
And flow along with your
Journey of poems! ! !

Sumi Nair

Submitted: Wednesday, October 09,2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 05,2013

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Hindi version: Aapke Padya Aur meri Tippani! ! !

Comments about Your Verses And My Comments! ! ! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • (12/18/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    an amazing poem again...... (Report) Reply

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/17/2013 11:48:00 AM)

    Thoughtful comments makes a beautiful poem. Nicely composed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/13/2013 4:52:00 PM)

    Let nothing obstruct the flow of your pen Wonderful words all pieced together beautifully (Report) Reply

  • (12/13/2013 11:55:00 AM)

    Good one I guess! A simple straight from heart poem. May I vote 8? (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (12/13/2013 3:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful compliment on your own poems! I understand that Sumi Nair and Geetha Jayakumar are one and the same entity! ! Any way I greatly enjoyed your poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, December 13, 2013

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