Z 5 W 1 H Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Z 5 W 1 H

Rating: 4.7


What are you looking for?
The worldly world you adore?
Where are you going to?
The heaven you've been exiled blue?
Why do you take pride and caprice?
As you're bearing your decease
How are we asleep and blight?
As we're up drinking all night
When will you come along?
My eyes to you belong
Who knows right from wrong?
Make up your mind
Be strong

(2009/2/24)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 19 April 2009

Nice piece, question is the pathway to answer.

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Linda Moore 07 March 2009

Questions, decisions to be made, Be Strong, sometimes to do the right thing you must have Strength of Character. Well done......10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 February 2009

A very very powerful poem.......essence of spiritualism and philosophy, in few lines. Kudos to u my friend.

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Tsira Goge 24 February 2009

As we're up drinking all night When will you come along? ......................................... What lovely grief... Very touchingly for someone, Nghtingale... Best wishes, Tsira

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