Souren Mondal

Gold Star - 31,382 Points (10th November 1991 / Chandannagar)

Zakhm Hare Hai Abhi - Poem by Souren Mondal

Zakhm hare hai abhi
Bhare hai ansu aankhon me,
Hai dil me abhi bhi aarmaan tujhe
pane ki,
Hai mohabaat abhi bhi mere naso me,

Bewafaayi ki saboot abhi bhi hai
aankhon ke saamne,
Hai chura abhi bhi seene me daba hua,

Khoon ki baarsaat me abhi bhi
bheege hue hai mere kapde
Hai taalaash ek ashiyaane ka

Zakhm hare hai abhi
diye the jinhe tune uss raat mujhe
Jab chaandni aasmaan me thi roshan,
par tha andheera mere kamre mein

Zakhm hare hai abhi teri
un batoon ki
Jinhe tune unhi hoothoon se tha kaaha
jine choomne ki aarzoo thi mere dil me,

Dard bhare hai abhi mere
labhzon me,
Hai chaahat abhi bhi milne se tujhse,

ai quatil mere aarmaanoon ki

Zakhm hare hai abhi teri bewaafayi ke
Kureed ke rakha hai maine unhe saamhaal ke,

Yaadein abhi hai teri mohabaat ki
Raatein abhi hai tanhaa,

Zakhm hare hai abhi
Bhare hai ansu aankhon me meri

Zakhm hare hai abhi
Teri yadoon se bhara para hai
bagicha
Har roz unhme aankhon se pani hai dena mujhe
Teri hi yadoon me jina,
hai marna mujhe....

Souren Mondal
Novermber 4,2015

Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal, love, pain

Form: ABC


Comments about Zakhm Hare Hai Abhi by Souren Mondal

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/2/2016 11:02:00 PM)


    Zakhm agar gehre hon to accha rehta hai, kyunki gehre zakhmon ka asar badi der tak rehta hai....acchi kavita hai...enjoyed reading it.. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Ahatisham Alam (12/2/2015 9:44:00 AM)


    Be intehaa dard hai aapke lafzon men (Report) Reply

    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (2/23/2016 12:47:00 AM)

    Sukhriya - :)

  • Ahatisham Alam (12/2/2015 9:40:00 AM)


    Bahut dare hai aapke alfaaz men (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (11/30/2015 10:23:00 PM)


    हर वह लफ्ज़ ताज़े हैं हमारे दिमाग में
    हरे हैं अब भी तुमने जो कही सारी बातें

    a nice write expressing your love for your beloved and how much you miss her - you may next time use the hindi typo for posting hindi scripts for a greater effect: -)
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    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (2/23/2016 12:47:00 AM)

    Thank you Kavya - :)

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/5/2015 10:43:00 PM)


    Wah wah kya baat hai, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , Yaadein abhi hai teri mohabaat ki
    Raatein abhi hai tanhaa,10
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    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (11/6/2015 12:11:00 AM)

    Sukriya Asim ji meri kavita parne ke liye...

  • (11/4/2015 8:42:00 AM)


    Wow it's my first time to read any hindi poem.. English me apne likha isliye may samjha.. It's a heart touching poem.. May mehsus Kiya apko Kavita... Thank you so much dear poet (Report) Reply

    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (11/4/2015 9:39:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading the poem Manna :)

  • (11/4/2015 7:11:00 AM)


    Achi nazm hai. Nice to read (Report) Reply

    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (11/4/2015 7:29:00 AM)

    Thanks...

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/4/2015 5:12:00 AM)


    very touching lines..Har roz unhme aankhon se pani hai dena mujhe
    Teri hi yadoon me jina.. the deep loss and pain felt by a jilted lover. thanks.
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    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (11/4/2015 5:51:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading my poem :)

  • (11/3/2015 9:49:00 PM)


    A very passionate love song longing in memory of the loved one and her cruel rejection of lover's advances
    10 points.
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    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (11/3/2015 10:50:00 PM)

    Thank you very much for reading my poem :)

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 4, 2015


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