Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
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(004) A Snake In My Garden

Rating: 3.4
One night I was in charge of the house
When my parents had gone out side
I was having loads of fun
With the radio blaring and paper planes that glide
Soon enough I got bored
So I went to the garden for a walk
When suddenly I saw a snake
Just next to a rock
It was definitely a snake
And it was the biggest one I have ever seen
It must have been a mile long
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Mysia Hayling 12 April 2018
nice poem. thanks for sharing. keep writing.
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Mysia Hayling 12 April 2018
interesting piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. keep writing thanks for sharing.
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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 19 November 2017
Narrative technique well squeezed. Good
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Davis Zak 02 February 2009
You can be funny too! Again a 10 from me.
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Florence P. Wordsmith 30 January 2009
Great poem. I love the twist!
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Patti Masterman 30 January 2009
There is somebody else who always tricks me with poems, and now you are doing it too! Oh, what is the world coming to? I really like this one. You are a master story teller probably from historical genetic lines of story tellers, am I correct?
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C T Heart 05 January 2009
Amazing poetic story with a great sense of humor...10 for this.
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Randy Hogan 29 December 2008
wow... from start to end wonderful done the last part i laugh so hard it still hurts..10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ amazing is what you are...... Peace and happy new year
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premji premji 27 October 2008
risha i will tell this poem to my little sons sure they will laugh a lot... +10 for a 10 year old...
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Kesav Easwaran 05 May 2008
risha, the police the firemen the press and every reader of this poem including me you turned each of us a fool using your garden hose! I really enjoyed your poetic naughtiness! God bless you! a ten out of ten for you!
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