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[01] I Want

Rating: 5.0

I want to be a lavender orchid
on your beaming verandah
That you'll spray water
and I'll see your face every morning.

I want to be a glittering pen
in your pulpy hand case
That you'll write poems
and I'll touch your emotions every day.

I want to be a brooding pillow
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Jurietta Duraan 10 May 2008

Beautiful 'wish' poem... lovely sentiments - my favourite lines are the first two... you could also just read the last line of every verse and that will be a poem in itself. Good one! Yuri*

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All wants to be so near to their beloved to be seen and in close vicinity... superb write....10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 October 2008

Ultimate passion seems to surpass all odds no matter what we'd face......and this piece is extremely passionate.Awesome writes Musaddeq.

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Trinity K 08 October 2008

, all lovers want to be near their beloved , , , so, nearness shimmers and make them blind..........! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! simple desire...but deep...cry..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Shimon Weinroth 01 October 2008

lovely poignant and tender,10

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Ester Agustin 17 September 2008

Delightful love poem..... your imagination is enticing...... i'm giving you a 10 on this one....

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