Manonton Dalan

01 Lasting Moments

for a while
you let me
have scented kiss,
touch loose threads.
my heart is yours
dreaming with you

my fingers
tried to weave
fabrics
but came loose
to full view
of my eyes

i tried
cover teasing
mounds of desire
but too weak
to oblige

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 10, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, May 25, 2009

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Comments about 01 Lasting Moments by Manonton Dalan

  • Sherry Ann Estacion (3/30/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    its cute... :) pretty emotional and expressive..

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  • Elna Mercado (3/30/2010 9:28:00 AM)

    lovely! ! ! ! so human, so poetic! ! ! ! !

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (3/14/2010 7:16:00 PM)

    very expressive...
    with firmness yet so sweet
    Thanks for sharing your works with us

    Maia

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  • Juan Carlos Abeti (12/18/2008 8:10:00 PM)

    short and expresive, excellent.

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