01 Lasting Moments Poem by Manonton Dalan

01 Lasting Moments

Rating: 5.0


for a while
you let me
have scented kiss,
touch loose threads.
my heart is yours
dreaming with you

my fingers
tried to weave
fabrics
but came loose
to full view
of my eyes

i tried
cover teasing
mounds of desire
but too weak
to oblige

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherry Ann Estacion 30 March 2010

its cute... :) pretty emotional and expressive..

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Elna Mercado 30 March 2010

lovely! ! ! ! so human, so poetic! ! ! ! !

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 March 2010

very expressive... with firmness yet so sweet Thanks for sharing your works with us Maia

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Juan Carlos Abeti 18 December 2008

short and expresive, excellent.

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