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[01] Moonlit Night

Rating: 5.0

I haven't seen anything lying
on the cool eye-beds
I haven't watched something smiling
that peeps through into blue room.

I have observed zero dreams
into the reddish wave on the blood
I have detected nil signals
from the coffee-purple aroma.

A snail is moving towards grief-land
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Sandra Fowler 09 September 2008

Very eloquent. Your mind draws memorable poem pictures. The last lines are particularly effective. Kind regards, Sandra

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Onelia Avelar 03 September 2008

I like your very individual style, the original approach, lack of sentimentality, the seeming coldness even arrogance in some of the poems... 'I haven’t seen anything lying on the cool eye-beds'. It is well measured however.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

I have detected nil signals from the coffee-purple aroma........no signal but something new with arrivals, cool moon light, to think of right...10

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Raj Nandy 01 June 2009

'.. losing petals on the noiseless dust! ' - Such philosophical imagery! I find them to be absolutely thrilling! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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rohit sapra 14 October 2008

I really liked reading this poem of yours since it has a deep feeling about it where a human is conscious and unconscious about things since it can be felt but isn't shown to be present which is beautifully described when you mentioned the dust moving without making its presence felt.

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Shimon Weinroth 23 September 2008

moonlit night in techicolor of metaphors, well done

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Wandering Scarlet 20 September 2008

very depressing it seems, like a late night....possibly insomnia? or too much coffee

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