(010) Forgive Me, Lord.......... Poem by premji premji

(010) Forgive Me, Lord..........

Rating: 2.9

'Forgive me Lord,
For I haven't read the Bible yet..'

'Then, what have you read? '

'Brothers Karamazov'...

'More than enough,
If possible read 'Les Miserables' too...'

A poem dedicated to Amaryllis Red

Ejaz Khan 30 July 2009

A good one, the human words are easy to comprehend and no obligation to abide by!

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Sandra Martyres 30 July 2009

Nice one Premji.....

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Sandra Fowler 30 July 2009

Well, at least you are having a dialogue with God. Your work holds the interest of this reader. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 30 July 2009

Your poem has the brevity and wit of a political cartoon. Clever. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 September 2009

I hav read les misserable..................10+

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Mamta Agarwal 13 August 2009

you never cease to amaze- irony, wit and humour. nice coversation with Lord. at least He responded. Mamta

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Indira Babbellapati 10 August 2009

reads like conversations with god!

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Kesav Easwaran 02 August 2009

Amary has nicely acknowledged the message in your dedicated effort...let us allow her to read the Bible and Les Miserables -both

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Yelena M. 31 July 2009

These twenty six letters are your weapons and you hit the target.You just got it..you got that split in my mind perfectly here. 'Les Miserables' are here to read :) Thank you. Amary.

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