Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Rookie - 0 Points (21/8/1998 / Cochin(India))

If I Were A..............? - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

If I were a rabbit
I would hop all around
I would nibble carrots
Without making a sound
If I were a lion
And even if I was full of might
As I was defeated by an ant
So I am on a vegetarian diet
If I were a fish
I will swim in the water
I won’t dare come out
Because then it will be hotter
If I were a horse
I would participate in races
And secure the first place
And look at happy faces
If I were a giraffe
I would have a view from the top
But I am still unlucky
Because I can not hop
If I were a kangaroo
I would hop around with a pouch
But I hope I won’t fall down
Otherwise I will say ‘ouch! ! ’
If I were a penguin
I would walk like a baby
If the weather becomes hot
I will have a swim, may be
If I were a monkey
I would sit on a tree
And keep throwing berries
On a poor old donkey
If I was that donkey
I would chew up the monkey
Even though I know
He is not that tasty
If I were a cockroach
I would steal food from the larder
I just hope my other task
Doesn’t become harder
If I were an eagle
I would soar in the sky
And look at my sumptuous prey
From up so high
If I were a camel
I would store food on my back
And then I will move on
Carrying it like a sack
If I were a peacock
I will dance in the showers
Amongst the tall trees
Amongst the beautiful flowers
If I were a sparrow
I will fly or eat grains
Bur even if I only do that
I still have lots of brains
If I were a duck
I will wade in the lake
But I will stop the poem here
Or you will shout, ” stop for heaven’s sake”


Comments about If I Were A..............? by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • (1/28/2019 10:01:00 AM)

    very nice
    It was very interesting and contained a lot of informations.
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  • Clinton Siegle (8/24/2018 6:23:00 PM)

    well it is a different type of poem. what type do you call it? (Report)Reply

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  • Rajesh Thankappan (8/20/2016 12:10:00 PM)

    Nice poem Risha, you can happily continue.... We will never tell you to stop. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/10/2015 5:49:00 AM)

    Risha is princess of imagination, So nicely she has written this poem I have no alternate but to comment it's simply wonderful.........10 (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2009 9:42:00 PM)

    I am going to post a wish list and please go on writing this one continually. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/16/2009 1:59:00 AM)

    I like it a lot... I wish I was free....keep writing......to me yr a genius...just like me.....forming poem versus within seconds...try reading my poems...if u have the time........ (Report)Reply

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  • (12/28/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    this poem is as cute n sweet as you are.
    great job, keep on writing!

    maryam
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  • (12/27/2008 9:26:00 PM)

    you've got quite an imagination going there ^_^...keep up the good work...
    yours,
    lc
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/16/2008 7:47:00 AM)

    Very nice Risha, marvellous.10 for it. (Report)Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (8/29/2007 6:34:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! Risha I was all wound up and just running along with this marvelous poem, I love it. I enjoyed all the animals you spoke of, you took me into the poem Risha and I could see each animal. You have a fabulous imagination and a lot of knowledge, Excellent poem as usual Risha.--Melvina-- (Report)Reply

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  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (7/25/2007 12:38:00 PM)

    Risha,

    Such an lovely poem, so clever and sooooo imaginative! Keep up the good writing. Have you tried writing Cinquain Poetry? If so, great! If not, if you would like the rules let me know.

    Most sincerely,

    D. A. Holmes
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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  • (6/16/2007 10:57:00 AM)

    I really love your poem Risha! You used a lot of great expressions in this 'very long' poem of yours. In this poem, did u imagine what some of the animals do or did u know it from the top of your head? (write your answer back)
    I also enjoyed the ending because it was very funny and entertaining. Anyway, I better stop typing before you read 2 pages of a comment and you fall asleep while reading it :) LOL
    Ta Ta!
    P. L..
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  • (4/8/2007 9:00:00 PM)

    Wow, what an imaginative, impressive poem that made me laugh! ((Smile)) You Risha have so much talent for writing poetry...and I look forward to reading more of your work soon.
    I am a friend of Melvina Germains and she told me about how wonderful your poetry is...she sure did not lie to me!
    If you continue to write U will be famous!
    Great imagery and you 4 sure know how to hold a readers interest no matter the length of the poem...Great JOB! ! (10stars)
    Keep writing from your heart,
    Shelley
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  • Cyclopseven R (4/7/2007 11:45:00 AM)

    Hi Risha

    This is definitely a clear and vivid portrayal of brilliant imagination. You are a ' tender' poet and a master of your 'piece'. The present is already bright, hope to see the splendor, yonder. Good luck.
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  • (3/31/2007 8:38:00 AM)

    Creative piece Risha, you made me smile.... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2007 4:24:00 PM)

    Thank you it made me smile, and thats good Take care Roy. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2007 11:52:00 AM)

    This is marvelous. You have a gigantic vocabulary Risha!
    Very charming poem.
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  • (3/30/2007 8:39:00 AM)

    Risha, I love your imagination and reading your poems...keep up the great work young lady! !
    Love and Hugs,
    Diane
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  • (3/30/2007 2:11:00 AM)

    Risha dear it's awesome. You have put all the beautiful words and nicely woven. If I were a bird, i will fly to you right now to give you a big hug and kisses. :) Take care. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2007 2:08:00 AM)

    dear risha...you are making only masterpieces....
    dear god gifted talent...your talent gives me extreme bliss..
    my dear daughter I remember a malayalam poem whenever I read you
    'chithra pathangame ninne kanden
    chitham thudichuyarunnoo...' read the poem and more from kumaran asaan, kunjunni, vailoppally and P.bhaskaran....they will sharpen you imagination more....love hugs.... uncle
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 29, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 8, 2011


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