GOD created 1000 emotions,
I feel each of them every day,
GOD hid them inside me,
And I show each of them every day.
Few I Understand and few I don't,
Few have roots in the soul.
Few I play with and Few play with me,
Few have no face at all
GOD created 1000 emotions,
I feel each of them every day,
I Feel Good, I Feel Bad,
In Sorrow, Tears I've Had.
My tears can flood the Desert,
that's the power emotions have Had.
GOD created 1000 emotions,
I feel each of them every day.
I laugh with the riding waves,
Even the hyenas feel shy,
A smile on my face, and even the dead smile in their Graves,
that's the power of my one emotion,
GOD created 1000 emotions,
I feel each of them every day.
In Anger I shout like hell,
All emotions goes in shell,
No Illusionist, can make disappear friends like this,
That's the power I hate of emotions.
GOD created 1000 emotions,
I feel each of them every day.
Hey, what happened to me?
I don't feel 'one' of them today, where is the smile on my friends?
I need to feel the bliss; I need to feel the pain,
I need smiling friends to bring back my smile.
GOD created 1000 emotions,
I need to feel each of them every day.
This is a very good poem Amit. There are some very good lines like 'my tears flood a desert' etc. and the idea is great about our anger distancing us from friends. The last two stanzas were really so good and gave a reasonable and decent ending to the poem. Good.
basic emotions are few but thousand are the ways they get manifested...good read, amit!
i loved this 10 of course! I loved the repetition of 'God created 1000 emotions' great work thanks for sharing
Being an emotional creature myself, I enjoyed your poem very much, Amit. The form of the poem and progression of thoughts is well done. I like the way you credit your emotions to the Creator, in whose image we were made.
A good start with a nice poem, Amit Jaiswal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Excellent articulation. Emotions enrich our life and depending upon the situation their expression makes our social and personal life worth it. Thanks. GOD created 1000 emotions, Few I play with and Few play with me, Few have no face at all
welcome to PH, and a 10+ for the very first poem. impressive and indelible
welcome to our PH..........emoticons coming ur way.............................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
welcome to poemhunter. you composed beautiful poem i truly enjoyed. one that comes from the heart always touches the heart remember that. always write what you feel.