1107 - Eighteen! Comments

‘…Calculating – Analysing // Searching for life and for love...’ Sir, it’s very in vogue ‘mental-makeup of teens [both yang and yin]. When one analyze and calculate she ends in crash landing in ‘true-love’. True Love is no horse trading so why calculate and analyze? Grab Love n’ jump. Face the hard reality together and romance will be stay always limbered-up… It is excellent poem and BIG TEN PLUSSSSSSS Ms. Nivedita UK

I love this poem, probilbly becuase i'm 18, it is so true and so funny, wonderful poem, and as always i enjoyed it very very very much! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10 and more)

what a poem! am not going to comment but only to appreciate you for a wonderful poem thanks a lot John,

Oh gosh lol I'll be 18 soon... I like how you put it all together. I'm looking forward to my future: ]

I try to imagine if I went back to eighteen it would be more wonderful than it ever was; but I know I am only fooling myself. I know if offered the choice, the whole world would jump at it without a thought. It is nice to know that reaper guy is very far away at eighteen, barring accidental grave injury! (smile)

I loved the comparison! an insightful poem! 10+++ Thanks For Sharing

John, it is nice. Each V tells 'bout what it feels when we turn eighteen. Eighteen is, in my opinion, the greatest moment in our life and you have described it well. I scored it 10...

I like it but my brother is almost going off to collge it is hord anyway 10 for your fantastic poem

Nice sentiment... a piece that makes you wonder especially when you look back and wonder what you were in that prime time when all that you obeyed was your testosterone :)

Nice job! ! ^_^ 10/10