(146) National Disintegration (Oneryu) Poem by premji premji

(146) National Disintegration (Oneryu)

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Disunity......................................................................................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 July 2009

A truth of nation's disfigurement being devoid of national harmony and unity is well illuminated in this oneryu.

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Saadat Tahir 17 July 2009

and.... disparunity*............................................................. both very bad for health and happiness thought provoking...word tc *Dispareunia...modified at the peril of self!

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Ency Bearis 13 July 2009

I second the motion....significantly true....10

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Raj Nandy 13 July 2009

Yes it is Disunity indeed! Caste, creed, illiteracy, population, poverty, mental make-ups/ hang-ups, lack of discipline, personal greed, - and a long list...! Gandhi ji tried and was shot! But one got to keep trying! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Antonio Liao 08 July 2009

Amazing...a hold up in a blue..... perfect solitude of emptiness ..... a dark in the dark...thank for sharing...God bless...10 +++++++++++

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Mamta Agarwal 29 August 2009

You hit the nail on the head. with fragmented souls, what do you expect. Mamta

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Aijaz Asif 29 July 2009

a very strong and thought provoking word sir....thanks for sharing 10++ rgds asif

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Kranthi Pothineni 18 July 2009

Well, everyone will agree with you if they are not ignorant.

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 July 2009

well this is different indeed sir.. one liners.. very thought provoking! ! loves shan

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Reshma Ramesh 17 July 2009

well said sir................

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