ف ل س ط ي ن Eagles' Nest)))))))) ف ل س ط ي ن (((((For Palestine)))))) Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

ف ل س ط ي ن Eagles' Nest)))))))) ف ل س ط ي ن (((((For Palestine))))))

Rating: 3.1


30/03 raped land's day..more than 60 years of occupation..many decades passed while an old lady caries her stolen home's key, wondering if this is realy what do they call civilization... a lady and a key grew old while they long to kiss that door.....to inhale that fresh air from that green land..



the green land



of birds always
said....

NO..for many traveling

and yes for one in hand

can't understand....

invasion of other's land? ?

.....................

un stable the ground

and so many and....

would you seek another....
as here
a moving sand..
it is an eagle's nest

....................

it's
for unique brand,

.from the wrong to stand

while birds are flying
and back with empty hand,

try to be the grand by leaving
other's land...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 30 May 2010

Tamara, with all due respects...this is so far removed from the English language...it hurts. You are riding on the backs of Camels wilth no saddles. So many mistakes...I am always amazed at your popularity.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Cheers, excellent work,10+++

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2009

no boubt... its one of your very heart feeling poems..I can feel what you said here and all is true and perfectly true... this is what I like in pieces that you show the mirrors to the world in true sense..well done dear and best friend...100 +++

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Abby Wall 29 May 2009

A very strong and beautiful piece... 10+(++++++++++++++++)

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James Mclain 29 May 2009

Could they ever be so ashamed to force your door at noons meal and take from your hand uninvited that which was never given freely...iip..or occupy a mind in like fashion.

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Marieta Maglas 26 June 2012

''while birds are flying and back with empty hand, ''-well written poem

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Besa Dede 14 April 2012

Sad notes described so simply, yet so deep. Thank you for sharing, ~Besa

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Hosny Soliman 13 October 2011

This land is our land Before Moses and jesus Where all prophets prayed hand by hand Read the history well, No invader stayed for ever All what we need is to be one hand

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2010

The shifting sands of time will level out one day lets hope before times run out then we can you say the eagle has landed, poem with thought for man...regards

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Tony Berndtsson 18 June 2010

This is interesting. Real interesting

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