ف ل س ط ي ن Eagles' Nest)))))))) ف ل س ط ي ن (((((For Palestine)))))) Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

ف ل س ط ي ن Eagles' Nest)))))))) ف ل س ط ي ن (((((For Palestine))))))

Rating: 3.1


30/03 raped land's day..more than 60 years of occupation..many decades passed while an old lady caries her stolen home's key, wondering if this is realy what do they call civilization... a lady and a key grew old while they long to kiss that door.....to inhale that fresh air from that green land..



the green land



of birds always
said....

NO..for many traveling

and yes for one in hand

can't understand....

invasion of other's land? ?

.....................

un stable the ground

and so many and....

would you seek another....
as here
a moving sand..
it is an eagle's nest

....................

it's
for unique brand,

.from the wrong to stand

while birds are flying
and back with empty hand,

try to be the grand by leaving
other's land...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 30 May 2010

Tamara, with all due respects...this is so far removed from the English language...it hurts. You are riding on the backs of Camels wilth no saddles. So many mistakes...I am always amazed at your popularity.

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 March 2010

The birds are enjoying their rights, if not hit ny a missile or a bombong plane. This subjugation is unatural. for how long then, truth will live and every one will see its victory. Btrave write, with a touch of resistence writers.10++

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Saadat Tahir 09 November 2009

A historic tragedy and injustice...well portrayed esoteric and portrayed sadly like the quagmire itself in an evanascent form.. well penned and great content cheers

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'when the birds are flying and back with empty hand' Rachel Ann Butler

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James Mclain 26 October 2009

Within each lonely grain of sand.. There went many before...and who knows when it is opened.. each hand, who's name the wind blows...iip

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Marieta Maglas 26 June 2012

''while birds are flying and back with empty hand, ''-well written poem

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Besa Dede 14 April 2012

Sad notes described so simply, yet so deep. Thank you for sharing, ~Besa

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Hosny Soliman 13 October 2011

This land is our land Before Moses and jesus Where all prophets prayed hand by hand Read the history well, No invader stayed for ever All what we need is to be one hand

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2010

The shifting sands of time will level out one day lets hope before times run out then we can you say the eagle has landed, poem with thought for man...regards

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Tony Berndtsson 18 June 2010

This is interesting. Real interesting

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