फुटपाथ (2) (Footpath 2 / Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga

फुटपाथ (2) (Footpath 2 / Hindi)

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पैदल चलने वालों का साथी
सड़क के दोनों और बना हूँ
नामहीन फुटपाथ सपाट सा
मेरा अता पता भी अब तो
कुछ लोगों ने है छीन लिया
रेहड़ी वाले और पोलिश वाले
सिगरेट, पान, तंबाकू वाले
फल वाले और मांगने वाले
और चमत्कारी अंगूठी वाले
बच्चों के खेल खिलोने वाले
फुटपाथों से सड़कों तक पर
अनाधिकार जम कर बैठे हैं
अब तो हालत कुछ ऐसी है
मैं खुद अपने को ढूँढ रहा हूँ
नामहीन फुटपाथ हूँ मैं तो...

Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: civil rights,lost,rights,road
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Another beautiful poem on footpath. I like walking on a footpath where books are laid out. The book sellers are so well informed that many a time, i have been able get rare books from them. As a lady, i feel comfortable and safe too, to walk on a street with books or even hawkers who sell their goods rather than a lonely road in Mumbai. In fact, i feel, they are a protection than a hindrance. Thank you Rajnish ji....10++

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2018

Yes, ease of shopping plus safety, especially for ladies, is foremost. Thanks for sharing your views. But, in some smaller markets, even the locals find it difficult to cross a stretch a street on foot. Shopkeepers themselves allow petty sellers for a fee. Booksellers organize their sales generally on Sundays. Geeta ji, your thoughtful inputs have, in fact, made important value additions on the subject.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 July 2018

AMDT.... HERE...911 WILL ONLY A TICKET GIVE TO YOU

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Akhtar Jawad 06 July 2018

Unauthorized encroachments are a problem in almot all Asian countries. It's a lovely poem on the footpaths.

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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2018

Partly due to socio-economic conditions and partly due to laxity on the part of administration, encroachments take place. Last year, several people died in a stampede on a railway over-bridge in Mumbai. This was attributed to small time sellers who occupied a part of the bridge Thanks a lot Akhtar Jawad Sahab..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2018

A clear and vivid picture of footpath has been astutely painted. It touches the readers. I quote......... रेहड़ी वाले और पोलिश वाले सिगरेट, पान, तंबाकू वाले फल वाले और मांगने वाले और चमत्कारी अंगूठी वाले बच्चों के खेल खिलोने वाले फुटपाथों से सड़कों तक पर अनाधिकार जम कर बैठे हैं अब तो हालत कुछ ऐसी है मैं खुद अपने को ढूँढ रहा हूँ नामहीन फुटपाथ कहीं का..... Beautiful poem. Tfs.

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Rajnish Manga 09 July 2018

Thanks for liking the poem and also for your encouraging comments, Sir. It means a lot to me.

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A reader 03 July 2018

I understand the sentiment of a gentleman!

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