The End Of Universe Poem by Rajnish Manga

The End Of Universe

Rating: 4.7


The End of Universe

The news
Must have reached your door steps
I have also come to know that
The universe is now expanding
At a rate slower than it was about
Three billion years ago.
Scientists have calculated that
At this rate the universe will survive
Another one billion years at the most.
Five Ws are pondering over the related issues.
Till the time a palpable solution to the riddle
Is available to us
Come, let us enjoy life to the fullest
Eat, Drink and Be Merry
Aboard a time machine,
‘Live and let live' should serve as
The cryogenic fuel
During our long voyage.

The End Of Universe
Sunday, August 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: drink,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 17 February 2016

Our universe will be beautiful, if only we live a life of happiness, peace, and love... A duty we shirk nowadays too much.. A wonderful poem Rajnish.. Thank you for sharing, and a hearty congratulation for being the poet of the day - :)

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Rajnish Manga 17 February 2016

Very nice and thoughtful critique on my poem. You have captured the central idea quite beautifully- Our universe will be beautiful, if only we live a life of happiness, peace, and love. Humanity has to be united to put in a collective effort to make it possible. Thank you, Souren.

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...........Youth shrivels away as one comes of age I pass away from this page

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2015

Eat, Drink and Be Merry Aboard a time machine, ‘Live and let live’ should serve as The cryogenic fuel During our long voyage..........wonderful envision. Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.

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This poignant ponderous poem ranks 71 in the best poems of members today. Congratulations.

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Made a revisit. Amazing to read again

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Rajnish Manga 05 July 2023

Thanks for your kindness and generosity, Unni Sir.

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me poet yeps poet 06 June 2022

YOU SAID IT YEARS AGO BUT IT STILL MOVES ON RM WHERE R U

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Maria Mitea 22 May 2022

Great work, Rajnish!

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me poet yeps poet 22 December 2021

IN A BILLION YEARS WHERE WILL U BE I WILL BE HERE ONLY RM JI

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