Rajnish Manga

Gold Star - 128,996 Points (September 10,1951 / Meerut (UP) / Presently at Faridabad (Haryana) , India.)

The End Of Universe - Poem by Rajnish Manga

The End of Universe

The news
Must have reached your door steps
I have also come to know that
The universe is now expanding
At a rate slower than it was about
Three billion years ago.
Scientists have calculated that
At this rate the universe will survive
Another one billion years at the most.
Five Ws are pondering over the related issues.
Till the time a palpable solution to the riddle
Is available to us
Come, let us enjoy life to the fullest
Eat, Drink and Be Merry
Aboard a time machine,
‘Live and let live' should serve as
The cryogenic fuel
During our long voyage.

Topic(s) of this poem: drink, universe

Form: Free Verse


Comments about The End Of Universe by Rajnish Manga

  • Kostas Lagos (7/22/2017 3:06:00 AM)


    Khayyam would be happy with this one! (Report) Reply

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  • Laurie Van Der Hart (7/17/2017 11:32:00 PM)


    Rajnish, I was looking for an English poem of yours to read, since you often kindly read mine and make thoughtful comments. I smile when I hear reports like this one about the universe's expansion slowing down, or the sun becoming a red giant, etc. First of all, our human knowledge is so limited and our estimations are so often wrong. Secondly, I imagine a person sitting spinning a wheel of an upside down bicycle. When it starts slowing down, he just gives it another boost with a flick of his finger. In my view, the unimaginable power of the One behind the universe and all creation, can effortlessly supply energy to where it is needed. What is more urgent for us humans to think about is whether we are tuned in with the Creator's thinking and principles, for with him is the source of life, even life eternal. Or the opposite. (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (7/18/2017 1:08:00 AM)

    I am so glad you visited this page and reviewed the poem in all seriousness that it deserved. With the help of a splendid example of a bicycle, you have nicely brought into focus the power of the supreme being in sustaining the celestial arrangement. Thank you very much indeed.

  • (7/3/2017 7:31:00 PM)


    Good writing (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2017 3:57:00 PM)


    Wow! Your poem explodes upon the computer's screen! Our long voyage has only just begun! (Report) Reply

  • (6/26/2017 10:51:00 PM)


    One billion years is still a very long time. Not too pessimistic, no false optimism either.
    One line reminds me of 'The Rubaiyat'- 'Come, let us enjoy life to the fullest/
    Eat, Drink and be Merry'.
    (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (6/27/2017 12:57:00 AM)

    Thanks for such a nice review of this poem. Yes, the spirit of Rubaiyat has its echo in these lines. Thank you so much, Michael.

  • (6/25/2017 11:13:00 PM)


    A deep and poetic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (6/20/2017 10:32:00 AM)


    The universe is now expanding
    At this rate the universe will survive
    Another one billion years at the most.
    Come, let us enjoy life to the fullest
    ‘Live and let live'
    Very nice poem and fine ideas and views of life.
    Thank you dear Rajnish Manga..
    (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (6/20/2017 1:19:00 PM)

    Thanks, Dr Tony. It is always a pleasure to receive appreciative comments and positive feedback from eminent poets like you. Thanks again.

  • Rajnish Mishra (6/12/2017 3:15:00 AM)


    This is a good one, deep and poetic. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Mishra Rajnish Mishra (6/12/2017 3:51:00 AM)

    Ha! Ha! I hope that the visits continue (and are reciprocated too) .

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (6/12/2017 3:37:00 AM)

    Thank you, Dear Friend, for your kind words about this poem (The End Of Universe) . It is nice to find Rajnish visiting Rajnish.

  • Robert Murray Smith (6/9/2017 1:55:00 PM)


    The end of the universe is the same as its begining unknown. Our universe is our mind that is also unknown. +++10

    Robert
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  • (6/7/2017 12:37:00 PM)


    Great write. We all need to enjoy life to the fullest. (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (6/7/2017 9:17:00 PM)

    Thank you very much indeed for your appreciative comments, Dear Poet Friend.

  • Tribhawan Kaul (6/2/2017 8:35:00 AM)


    The mantra 'Live and let live' is eternal mantra to survive even if the dooms day is near. Lovely (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (6/2/2017 8:42:00 AM)

    Thanks for a fine review and an appreciative note on the poem, Sir.

  • Tribhawan Kaul (6/2/2017 8:32:00 AM)


    The mantra ' Live and let live' given here is eternal mantra for the survival even if the dooms day near. Lovely :) (Report) Reply

  • Upendra Majhi (5/27/2017 2:19:00 AM)


    Wionderful poem whose wonder is reflected by inundation of comments.
    Thank you Mangasahab for commenting so elaborately and with so much praise that my poem At 59, What I remember got selected as member poem. I am very happy today.Thank you very very much.
    (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/27/2017 6:36:00 AM)

    Thanks for your kind appraisal and a very positive feedback on this poem (The End Of Universe) . Your poem 'At 59' is an exceptionally beautiful poetic treat for me and a host of other like-minded readers.

  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (5/25/2017 10:46:00 AM)


    Nice poem with different topic sir.
    Thank you.
    (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/25/2017 9:38:00 PM)

    Thanks for being on this page and for your kind words of appreciation, Vaidyanathan ji.

  • Christina Simmons (5/21/2017 10:45:00 AM)


    A very valid point: makes one ponder deeply in a philosophical manner. Well done! (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/21/2017 12:58:00 PM)

    Thanks a lot for a fine review and a positive feedback of the poem (The End Of Universe) , This is indeed very inspiring.

  • (5/14/2017 1:24:00 AM)


    Thankfully we will no longer be around
    We'll live as advised in your poem profound
    Thanks for sharing my friend-10
    (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (5/12/2017 1:49:00 PM)


    drink is a topic.

    was the poet drinking beer as he composed the poem, biding his time till the end? ?

    i won't lose much sleep 'over' the predictions! at least the mortgage payments should be
    ended by then as well.

    bri :)
    (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/12/2017 11:03:00 PM)

    No, I was not drinking beer then but reading comments by Bri Edwards seems to be the perfect occasion to gulp a pint or two. Thanks a lot.

  • Paul Reed (5/12/2017 6:39:00 AM)


    Live and let live, never has such wisdom been crammed into one such short phrase. Well written Rajnish. (Report) Reply

  • Shimizu Mizuhala (5/10/2017 2:56:00 AM)


    Good poem, we should be optimistic about the end of the universe.Thanks. (Report) Reply

    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/10/2017 3:29:00 AM)

    Thanks for appreciation and also for sharing your thoughtful views on the subject, Sir.

  • Rebecca Navarre (5/9/2017 9:29:00 PM)


    Interesting Rhyme! ! ! ! ! Interesting riddle! ! ! ! !
    Even Makes You Giggle! ! ! ! !
    God Be With All! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
    Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++
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    Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/10/2017 1:47:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for such a wonderful feed back about this poem (The End Of Universe) . The 10's come to me as your blessings and good wishes.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 16, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, February 5, 2016


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