ramesh rai

Gold Star - 26,471 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

24 Hrs. Of Life - Poem by ramesh rai

24 hours is given to me
to fulfill my all commitments
not even a single second
can be added or minimized

24 hrs. of my life
is the rational factors of my life
to achieve the goal of my life
within 24 hrs. of my life

I have to complete the journey
from moon to sun
I have to laugh and cry
love and be annoyed

24 hours of my life
is more precious than
century of my life.

Comments about 24 Hrs. Of Life by ramesh rai

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/13/2014 12:00:00 PM)

    a day of a lion is better than a century of a jackal. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/23/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    So beautifully said Ramesh. If we cannot achieve our goals and dreams in life,
    within 24 hours, what good is a century of doing nothing, adding to our lives?
    Every moment in life is a precious petal of being. Another great idea, Ramesh.
    Thank you for the seasoning of reason you place in my mind through your poetry.
    (Report) Reply

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (11/17/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    Beautiful words and beautiful plans. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (10/3/2013 4:13:00 PM)

    2 hours would mean more than a century. good write (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2013 9:27:00 PM)

    to achieve the goal of my life.... nice one i liked..10

    day and night
    you are right
    time is limited
    but you are committed
    (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (7/9/2013 12:17:00 PM)

    Very nice thought. A short life of good deeds is better than a century of nothing. (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2013 12:21:00 AM)

    Each 24hours if spent wholly will certainly be precious for the Century of our lives! A beautiful advice to all! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2013 7:23:00 AM)

    Ramesh Rai I admire your intellect, a well written poem, indeed all we have is 24 hours if we don't make them work as you rightly say from moon to sun, we lost them. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2013

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