4 Stages- - (Love) Poem by Neela Nath Das
4 Stages- - (Love)
Your presence
is an experience
of rare love I ever
had...
My sorrows evaporate,
I feel no more sad.
In your absence
the aura encompasses
me with care,
with none I wanna
share!
I'll die soon,
my soul will
wait for you
there(?) .
How are you
without me?
Not well,
I can distinctly
see!
I am searching
you on land
in sea,
In the sky,
along the lea.
In desert the
cool breeze
which soothes your
blistered body,
it's me!
You are not in my
life, another
butterfly has
hijacked you
from me- - - - -
go be happy
and your face
I don't want
to see.
Love we all want and to loose a treasure is hard to imagine you present it with honesty from your heart...regards
Deep and thorough. Another butterfly has hijacked you, so nicely written. there is a difference between -in love- and -love- the first one is something we fall in and out of, an infatuation the second one is a verb, a do-word, somehting we do. I agree that the first one comes and goes and is associated with tremendous feelings Very nicely written in this poetic and melodious poem
love smells sweetly but it is bitter and sweeter, position of tongue get you the taste/ a poem writ on based on truth thank u
Lost love, but we move on and find it anew. Very well penned Hari.
The poem unfolds a variety of sentiments through different stages of a protagonist's love life and all of them have been portrayed quite diligently- simple and succinct. Thanks, Neela ji, for sharing such an amazing poem.
: -) . a smile, i have. smile in worth and worst. and love... love lives in life-full heart. may the Heart beats, and beats...
Lovely poem touching indeed...life has to move on... Please do write some comments for my poems too...
a lost love is difficult to endure, but tomorrow will come, and it will be better.
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12/5/2025 2:49:57 AM # 1.0.0
Soul stirring and poignant! Free flow of unveiled emotions! ! Leaving space for others, let us move on! Nothing is static! !