6. Say ….? ? ? ? ? ? ….. ‘click’ Poem by Abha Sharma

6. Say ….? ? ? ? ? ? ….. ‘click’

Rating: 3.8


My esteemed reader
Warm greetings welcome you
But ah! Something is missing
It should be between us
Yes….here it comes!
Say ….Cheese….. ‘CLICK’

The distance between us now erased
With your flexing muscles,
Your beauty enhanced
With this gesture’s blaze.

What do we lose?
With a little stimuli,
The earth becomes heaven
With your sweet smile.

Your eyes sparkle
And love does bloom
Wrinkles delayed
Happiness makes room.

A Smile is a pleasure
A Smile is an honor
Pluralism has no space
Serene Notions stimulate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 25 April 2008

still beauty being blazed by the reader when glazed by the third eye(smile) .................most interesting as ur inference goes by your ecletic intellect, sui-generis, quite enjoying,10+, thanks for sharing

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 April 2008

How delightful! ! ! ! ! It has already made this a better day! ! ! ! ! ! Abha, this reveals your personality to us all. Greenwolfe 1962

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Craig Anderson 28 April 2008

This poem could bring a smile round the world. Excellent Abha. Regards Craig.

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Lynda Robson 28 April 2008

A delightful poem Abha, smile and the world smiles with you, here's smiling at you my friend, Lynda xx

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Vaibhav Shah 28 April 2008

Smile is something that has become rare now a days.This poem is a kind of rebirth of the value of the smile.Many problems can be solved by this smile only.It is a sweet message in the form of a beatiful poem.I will always try to smile henceforth.

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Lost Poet 01 November 2009

really gr8 work dear....... keep it up...

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Lost Poet 01 November 2009

really gr8 work dear....... keep it up...

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2008

Wow! what a poetic appeal to the electronic media. A click does wonders.Art blooms with appreciation. It creates a genius. But you have established yourself by now. You are a name to recon with. Keep it up. Excelsior!

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David Desantis 12 May 2008

Great one Abha! I almost blinked when you said click haha

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As Serene Notions, this poem stimulates me to the liking for its author. So I'd like te greet her in a way which will please her: with a lovely smile.

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