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A Paradigm Shift

Rating: 3.9
Driving straight is fun
But careful dive along bow bends,
Trivial anticlimactic stances
Breed carking differences

World cascades in future
The young grows up in age
Doesn’t have to wait too long
Dichotomy picked up with a tong

Eccentric eclectic wits
Insinuate egotistical thoughts
Myopia bothers any swap
Slipup in a surly wrap

Angst-ridden fronts
Denigrate each other
Words, attitude, feeling, love
Transcend the paradigm.

So surreal an avant garde

The deluge will carry us all…
Towards many paradigm shift
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Roland Bastien 23 August 2008
The deluge will carry us all… Towards many paradigm shift -------------- I do feel your image and its linguistic approach
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Indira Renganathan 05 August 2008
Anguish lines splendidly written.Good subject.Thanks for sharing
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Egi David Perdana 21 May 2008
the paradigma it's style art of wonderful life
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Andrew Blakemore 20 May 2008
Another deep and meaningful piece of work Abha. Well done. Andrew
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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008
Profound, yes, but lucidly put across, with the controlled vocabulary, and some good imagery!
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Karan Baadkar 06 May 2008
Twards Paradigm Shift is anther lovel masterpiece from a writer of your calibre.. u r a master in your own stly n class... Keep writing, Best wishes, karan
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 04 May 2008
A rare philosophical picturisation in words...........
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C. P. Sharma 03 May 2008
An appealing poetic analysis of a pardigm shift. I am adding my point of view as follows: Drop the dichotomy, live with One, All doubts and delusions will be done; Future and past always mislead, In the present lies the seed. Never ever let this paradigm shift, Else to angst-ridden fronts you drift.
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Roland Bastien 01 May 2008
Dichotomy picked up with a tong ....Words, attitude, feeling, love Transcend the paradigm. So surreal an avant garde --------------- I had the feeling to read Beaudrillard theory in poetry...Brillant....You have the technic to craft theory through poetic form, like the old classics.
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David Harris 29 April 2008
Abha, all what I would have like to have said has been said and more. This is just simply BRILLIANT. Top marks and thanks for sharing your talent with us my friend. David
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