Melvina Germain

Gold Star - 25,215 Points (Sydney, Nova Scotia)

(684) Love (Acrostic) No.5 - Poem by Melvina Germain

Love creates a sensual stream, intensifying all romantic dreams.
Over picturesque landscapes, hills and mountains high.
Victoriously seen through a keen mind's eye.
Every electrifying moment captured inside.

Written: Jan.14,2008


Comments about (684) Love (Acrostic) No.5 by Melvina Germain

  • (1/24/2008 12:48:00 PM)


    Hmmm I think Melvina U have captured 'Love' again in this one...
    Keep sharing from the heart and yeah the 'piano plan' 4 sure sounds likeit worked 4 U! ((Smile))
    Shelley
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  • (1/18/2008 12:14:00 AM)


    each additional poem about love that i read that you have written shows me the passion that you hold inside your heart and mind, , , blessings...Cecil (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2008 1:34:00 AM)


    As I've told Marci M., I just happen to be an enormous fan of the acrostic form. There are a myriad charged moments that one is able to distill down into a potent
    potable, splashed with a hint of creme de menthe or triple sec to dance such an intoxicating blend swirled on the tongue and savoured on the palate. One doesn't necessarily need to douse a multicoloured laden palette to paint an engaging, pretty picture as you have adeptly proven with this tasty morsel. How's that for mixing metaphors? Well done, Melvina!

    Sincerely,

    Greg

    One nitpick: change minds to the possessive mind's.
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  • (1/15/2008 1:00:00 AM)


    whoever said love is blind, must have been in prison cell...true Melvs...the magic of love (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, March 24, 2008


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