(861) Missing You (((1))) Poem by Melvina Germain

(861) Missing You (((1)))

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Tortured love in my heart, you tore it apart.
With the twist of a telephone wire,
you took away my utmost desire.
I cry for you through tear-filled eyes.
I long for your touch, I miss you oh so much.

Written: February 11/07

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 11 February 2007

Short but mighty powerful write Melvina, , , , , , , , well done

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2007

'Missing you', two very sad words. Eloquent write, Melvina. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Another great poem that is sad and very well written! So much said in so few words...Great job Melly! Keep up the great work. ((Hug)) =Shelley=

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David Harris 17 February 2007

Melvina, short, but as beautiful as ever. Great wordage as ever. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Esther Leclerc 16 February 2007

Stark emotion; how you manage it poetically I don't knowm but you do. Torture is right.

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Dee Daffodil 16 February 2007

Very revealing line...with a twist of a telephone wire... Awesome...next... Hugs, dee

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Duncan Wyllie 12 February 2007

And you put it all, oh so well, Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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