(a) 17 (Love/Passion) I Wish You To Unfold Me ~ Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
(a) 17 (Love/Passion) I Wish You To Unfold Me ~
I wish you to unfold me
I wish you to hold me
I wish you to undress me
I wish you to bless me
I wish you to ravage me
I wish you to savage me
I wish you to blaze me
I wish you to daze me
I wish you to love me
Love me to death
I wish you to smother me
Smother me with your love
I wish you to inspire me
Inspire me to sing
Sing with you
Together
Where we can view
and feel
A garden of paradise
WOW! What a wish! ! ! Sounds good to me. Nice flowing rhythmic piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Sizzling but tender... love that gush of emotion, devotion, perhaps. Uplifting to read.Yes, it all lies in the 'unfolding'... that one word says it all. Splendid work. t x
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4/26/2024 1:29:05 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Great poem that holds alot of truth about what we wish and want from a love relationship! Much emotion was expressed in this well written piece...and then I liked how you wrapped it all up in the end... Great job 'Tranquil Ocean'...Keep up the good work, ==Shelley==