Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(a) 17 (Love/Passion) I Wish You To Unfold Me ~ - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

I wish you to unfold me
I wish you to hold me
I wish you to undress me
I wish you to bless me
I wish you to ravage me
I wish you to savage me
I wish you to blaze me
I wish you to daze me
I wish you to love me
Love me to death
I wish you to smother me
Smother me with your love
I wish you to inspire me
Inspire me to sing
Sing with you
Together
Where we can view
and feel
A garden of paradise


Comments about (a) 17 (Love/Passion) I Wish You To Unfold Me ~ by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (4/24/2007 1:45:00 AM)

    Great poem that holds alot of truth about what we wish and want from a love relationship! Much emotion was expressed in this well written piece...and then I liked how you wrapped it all up in the end...
    Great job 'Tranquil Ocean'...Keep up the good work,
    ==Shelley==
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  • Ernestine Northover (2/6/2007 8:11:00 AM)

    WOW! What a wish! ! ! Sounds good to me. Nice flowing rhythmic piece.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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  • (2/6/2007 3:27:00 AM)

    Sizzling but tender... love that gush of emotion, devotion, perhaps. Uplifting to read.Yes, it all lies in the 'unfolding'... that one word says it all. Splendid work. t x (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 8, 2011


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