(a) 20 (Love/Passion) Oh, Yes! Lets Reach New Heights Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 20 (Love/Passion) Oh, Yes! Lets Reach New Heights

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Can you feel me?
Feel my spirit

Can you fill me?
Fill my emptiness

Can you stroke me?
Stroke my passion

Can you hold me?
Hold the lightness of my soul

Can you behold me?
Behold the beauty that is within

Can you touch me?
Touch me and make me whole

Can you hear me?
Singing through my skin

Can you see me?
Dancing with delight

Can you guide me?
Show me the light

Can you merge with me?
Lets reach new heights

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 February 2007

another great poem tranquil... show me the way to my love...

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Alison Smith 09 February 2007

Simple but provoking.... nice write Alison

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 February 2007

LAST NIGHT, WE GOT THE INVITATIONS & TONIGHT WE GET TO SEE WHAT WE MISSED...OK FOR YOU, T.O.! ....Sensual & Romantic w/ a spritz of Erotica...Hey.one must enjoy th' fruits of life now & then, yes? A solid Penning... Frank/FJR

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Geoff Warden 08 February 2007

Very nice write T.O.

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