Weave me into you
You, the warp and I, the weft
In between, no space left
If anyone tried to tear
Will fail, because we will share
A bond
So strong
With
An amalgation of our spirits
No you
No me
Only We
Only We
Beautiful Poem Tranquil, I really loved it. Take care, You are one talented poet.
This is a nice poem but the whole of itis undermined by the use of 'coz'. You poeticise well, throughout, but plant a slang word in the middle. The word 'because' seems to me to be quite a central word to this poem and it seems a shame to use a dumbed down expression. otherwise bI think it is quite a lovely piece.
Two souls bound so tightly together - wonderful imagery TO, love it. Justine
Praiseworthy! Golden thread of love warped by longing and the caterpillars weave a silk cloth.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely poem TO - strong and inspirational, Steve